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See me?
Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

0 posted 2002-03-14 03:23 PM

Torn

He was all I ever wanted
I dreamt about him everyday
His touch the feel of his lips on mine
The way he would look into my eyes and say he loved me
He finally said he wanted me back
I was overwhelmed with joy
Then it all shattered
All the things he did to hurt me all came flooding back
The way he didn’t think of me
The way he wouldn’t even look how I felt
He’s too tired and doesn’t think of how it will affect me
I love him so much but I can’t live with the pain every time he doesn’t think of me.

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2002-03-14 03:44 PM

girl i know hoe you feel i was just told by my now ex bf that he has a new life and doesn't need me.

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2002-03-14 05:43 PM

ouch, i know how ur feeling right now...i'm going through it right now...good write though bye

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-04-05 01:24 AM

See me?-
These are some very painful emotions, and
you've expressed them well.
Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2002-04-05 08:43 AM

Oy.
Boys really need to do some growing up.
Arg...

Anyway, I understand your pain, and it sucks. Great write, theraputic isn't it?

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2002-04-05 02:51 PM

*hugs* I know how this feels...

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

6 posted 2002-04-05 03:21 PM

Boys...can't live with 'em, can't live without 'em. I know how you're feeling though, oh boy, falling in love is the best thing in the world... until you fall out of it.

*Erica*

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2002-04-05 05:52 PM

Such a difficult situation. Im sorry that this is all so hard for you hun. The poem was very good though. Keep em coming

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2002-04-06 12:58 PM

this is so sad....I do understand these feelings well. I hope you can move on, and find the kind of love that is returned

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