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Teen Poetry #5

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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-03-13 03:42 PM

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So many night,
I go to bed,
wishing to never awake.

Wishing,
I wouldn't have to live,
through another day,
of Hell.

A day,
filled with nothing,
but fighting,
and anger.

A day,
that I wish,
would come to an end.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-03-13 04:54 PM

I know exactly what you mean, so many days I just want to go to bed and never wake up. But the alarm always rings and I am always there, lving through another day of "hell"

~Lisa

See me?
Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

2 posted 2002-03-13 05:11 PM

I can also relate, the fear of actually going to sleep because the mornig will come quicker. emotions nicely conveyed Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

3 posted 2002-03-13 09:39 PM

You know, I had something to say, but then I saw your critique message and I forgot it... Sorry. I've been going through this major depression lately, and I've had problems with conflicting parts of me, which I named, for the sake of writing it down, my mind, my soul, and my heart. And my heart is wrong, let me assure you...

Oh well. Regardless, I enjoyed the poem. Thanks.

Kielo

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