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corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

0 posted 2002-03-11 09:37 PM

Alone at last
dreaming of you.
how i wish to be with you
and never the less
you wish to be away.
your not near but not far
and yet the burnig inside me
grows stronger every day for your love.
but knowing it may never be
that love you have to give.
never will i be able to hold you
hold you in my arms
and show the love i have to give.

Only you are the one i love
may it be somthing about you
undiscribale
that words cant say how i feel
it hurts to know
that i,
i will never be complete

Only you can complete me
for i am waiting...

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-03-11 10:11 PM

Hmmm...this is well done! I liked it! And can relate to it on many levels! Thanks for sharing! Be sure to drop by more!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-03-12 04:23 PM

I like it. It works for me! Thanks for the read!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2002-03-13 04:44 AM

awwwww this is so sweet corey.....but VERY wistfull too...and wistful poetry makes me sad. youre a great romance poet "jes like yer big brudder"

...sweet poem, i enjoyed reading it. its nice seeing you around here again, post more often buddy

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2002-03-13 09:52 AM

Thank you for sharing this poem, I really enjoyed reading such a great poem

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

chas
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

5 posted 2002-03-14 08:42 PM

hey cory, forgot the "e"...my fault.. nice poem, but not your best.. get some lesson from your brother.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2002-03-15 11:38 AM

It is so hard to sit around and wait for something you want so bad..but hopefully it'll all be worth your while. Great job!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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