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Cinderelly
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0 posted 2002-03-11 12:56 PM


Memories,
late night phone calls,
countless fights.

A year lost in false feelings.

Hearts intertwined,
in memories
of days gone by.

He is my past,
may be my present,
and hopefully my future.

+ Suggestions welcome! -Jamie +



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1 posted 2002-03-11 01:30 AM


if they were false feelings why would you want this person in your life at all? I am confused...but then, it is past my bed time LOL
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I hope he turns out to be all the things that you wish

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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3 posted 2002-03-11 06:31 PM


Oh the memories you dragged up for me! "Countless fights"... I hope everything works out for you the way you want it to!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

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4 posted 2002-03-11 09:09 PM


The false feeling I refered to were one's that kept us apart . . . I'm not sure if that helps . . .

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

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