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LCBS
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0 posted 2002-03-07 09:00 PM


With every laugh that I have laughed
I've cried a thousand tears
For every smile that graced my lips
I've frowned through a thousand fears
I think god is punishing me
But why must I feel such pain
Have I lived for nothing but hurt?
Has this life been all in vain?

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1 posted 2002-03-07 10:11 PM


"take the initiative, step into your shadow, and pull yourself through an inverted black, shinning white" - P.W., I like the poem, great foundation, now dig until you finally find something to justify your emotions a thousand times over, and that will be spiritual gold.
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2 posted 2002-03-09 01:22 PM


Most of our lives are in vain but the object of this game is to live life the way you want to live. If something needs to be changed, you change it.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

::Most people never listen::
Ernest Hemingway

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3 posted 2002-03-10 11:30 PM


I've asked myself those questions before as well and im still waiting for an answer. Hope you get one soon though...

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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