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Demonic Illusion
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since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

0 posted 2002-03-06 03:24 PM

I give my all to you,
Everything I will do.
Take your hand give you my heart,
Smile and tell you I'll never part.
Bringing tears of joy to me,
If only I could let you see.
Everything I say is from my the heart,
But you knew that I gave it from the start.
Kiss you softly and hold you tight,
Whispering little nothings all night.
Afraid of falling asleep,
In my arms you I keep.
Love you as I do,
Think of nobody but you.
This brings tears to my eyes,
Never tell each other lies.
And for you I give my heart,
I give my mind,
My soul and my love,
I give my all to you,
My angel from above.

Encarta
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world

1 posted 2002-03-06 03:39 PM

Great poem, very nicely done. It's obvious you care very much for the person.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2002-03-07 05:33 AM

Awww this is so sweet!!! Keep that special person close to you!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-03-08 10:02 AM

Hey---this is well done! Simple, yet pure! To the point! Excellent---you don't see this done much in newer poetry these days! I'm glad that you've found someone you care enough to write this poem! Good work DI!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2002-03-09 11:55 AM

While I don't care much for love poetry at all, the rhyme scheme was well done. The repetition of certain sounds made it appear more like a chant than a poem.

Thanks for sharing. Remember to reply to others as well.

~AF~

::Most people never listen::
Ernest Hemingway

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-03-10 11:34 PM

Aww very sweet poem!!! Sounds like you truly love this person..

I hope they know how lucky they are to have someone who cares about them as much as you do

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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