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Tomorrow Suzanne
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Tomorrow Suzanne |
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xerxes Junior Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 34 |
All along our narrow road My desperate load Truths untold Love on hold. Where we laughed I'm sorry I never came back A memory never let’s go Second chances I’d blow Hateful words I’d throw Are we still so unknown? I lost us back then Missed your grin You comforted my sin. These few words for you All voids and illusions we fell through If I’d only knew I’d take back all time And every tear When you loved to be mine Wish you were here. Put back together everything thats broken Bring back even words unspoken Give a dream something worth hoping. Then, it was us Your broken trust My tortured rush. Now, it’s just me Wandering Still remembering With lost smiles I’m found pretending Regretting. Days of change No more pain. There I am Lying face down in the sand Holding a picture in my hand Trying to break free from Yesterday's trap with all we had Today, it’s our demons that haunt my mental land Asleep, in a cold sweat I ask……. “ Is it Tomorrow, yet, Suzanne?” -Xerxes [This message has been edited by xerxes (02-27-2002 03:30 AM).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
A memory never let’s go Second chances I’d blow Hateful words I’d throw Are we still so unknown? That part I like best!!!  You wrote a really great poem. If you ever wanna chat my email is up above!!! ~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~ |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow...you had some great images there...the only thing that bugged me was your rhyme scheme...but the rest was awesome..  Zombie |
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