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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
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0 posted 2002-02-26 07:40 PM


Hey again!  This is one that really has no point to it...  It's kinda a song I guess...  Me and my friend were walking, and she's like, small, and I'm like...  not.  lol  But we were walking, and she was having trouble walking so I'm like, "Want me to carry you?" and she's like, "Nah, want me to carry you?!"  Anywho...  That's where this came from, just so ya have a bit of an idea.  O, if ya don't know what a dilly bar is, it's one of those round ice cream things from dairyqueen...  Anywho, lemme know what you think.     

TOOTHPICK AND DILLY BAR

A toothpick and a dilly bar
Were walking one day
The dilly bar offered to carry her
Here's what the toothpick had to say

"No, I think I'm doing good
But if you have any trouble
I'd carry you if I could
...Or at least I'd try"

They laughed it off
And they joked around
They just couldn't get over
Just how funny that did sound

"No, I think I'm doing good
Bit if you have any trouble
I'd carry you if I could
...Or at least I'd try"

It really would be funny
A toothpick carrying a dilly bar
But I don't really think
That they would get very far

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

© Copyright 2002 C.K.N. - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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1 posted 2002-04-16 03:26 AM


ROFL@this: "Me and my friend were walking, and she's like, small, and I'm like...  not.  lol" *ahem* sorry that cracked me up

Loved the comparison of the dilly bar. Cute poem/song! Keep em comin.
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2 posted 2002-04-16 01:36 PM


LoLoL very interesting cody!!! very interesting...

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

vlraynes
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3 posted 2002-04-18 04:14 AM



Cody-
I love Dillybars, and I LOVE these little
ditties you're coming up with!  Too funny!
Keep 'em coming!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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