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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Notice I've just been getting shorter and shorter?:P but here's another one I conjured up at work..be honest with me please? Our friendship No longer in service It's time to dial Another number And perhaps this time I will be able to get through With a clear connection And not so much static On the other end Perhaps this time I won't be disconnected From another friend... [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (02-26-2002 06:13 PM).] |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Short but sweet It seems our phone lines are crossed, because I know exactly what you are going through...{ok so the metaphor wasnt great, but I couldnt think of any good ones,} how about this, call me if you ever need to talk.....GREAT POEM ~LCBS Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*calls you* hehe you know that is mad weird we always seem to be on the same wave length, I always know what you are going through when you write your poems bc I'm going through that atm..that's been happening to me alot with certain ppl..I guess I'm finally finding those right connections all I have to do now is take it one day at a time..  Kris |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
*answers phone* just wanted to say thanks for calling, and your poetry is really great and expressive. Maybe we are going through the same things because life truly sucks for all teens...hehe.... ~LCBS P.S. I'll be waiting by the phone |
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xerxes Junior Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 34 |
my line has been diconnected sometime, I found that even when the call gets through the conversation never does. A beautiful write. -Xerxes |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
=) loved it and i know exactly what you mean A life without love…is no life at all. |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
I really like the phone metaphors in this poem! Great write . . . Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Man I hate this.  It's all too common. *sigh* I like short poems tho, they don't hurt my brain too much  Nice! Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ceinwyn~ No matter how short your poems are they are always to the point and amazing!!! Ive been through this...And its always tough but we all get through it!!! Keep your head up girl, theirs other friends out there!!!  ~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~ |
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