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xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2002-02-26 11:48 AM

Just try it,
Try to push on me a little more.
See how far you can make me fall,
See how hard i'll hit the floor.
Try to keep on testing me,
Keep on seeing how far you can go.
See how many words you can say to hurt me,
See how many tears i can let flow.
Keep it coming,
Dont give up and get tired just yet.
See how aggrivated i can be,
See the ultimate level at which i'll get upset.
Dont give up now,
You've almost won the fight.
See how strong and forceful your words are,
See how far you can drag me out from the light.
Dont get discouraged,
When i laugh in your face.
When you finally see your a nobody,
And you didnt even budge me from my place.

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-26 03:01 PM

Don;t you hate people who put down others to make themselves look better. You're a stronger person than I am to stand up for yourself. Great Job

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

2 posted 2002-02-26 05:04 PM

Oh, wow Shugah. Dark, deep, and.... angry.

*walks over and protects Shugah* I enjoyed the read.... very quick moving, and well written. Email me again sometime.

Sincerely,
Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

xerxes
Junior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 34

3 posted 2002-02-26 08:57 PM

Deeply profound, but tragiclly beautiful, sometimes the anger and fustration of always being "looked down upon" always brings us to our darkest room, where anger is our only light. I'm found sitting in that room often, i'll look for you next time.
-Xerxes

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2002-02-27 06:55 AM

Shugar~
As always good work!!! I really like this one!!! Great subject. But we all do it, we all look down on people even if we dont think we are. I know I have done it and probably will for the rest of my life. Its just the way we are. Like you have to find a reason to show someone you are better then them. Im glad you posted this!!!

p.s.~isnt aggrivated that supposed to be spelled aggravated??? Im not sure just letting you know though!!! Not looking down on you for your spelling mistakes!!!

Dont think that!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2002-02-27 08:36 AM

Haha burnnnn

I've felt this before... you go at em girl

Jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2002-02-28 05:25 AM

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAH! you go michele!!...this poem rocks!...loved the read very much!

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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