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xerxes
Junior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 34

0 posted 2002-02-26 04:07 AM

It’s all the misery
Of being free
To fail to succeed
I was me
Now I’m a dream
Believe?
In what?
Who?
It seems
Doors are shut
Everything’s through
Clouds of smoke
I’m sorry though
I should have went when I had the chance to go.
Someone listening?
Am I still wishing?
Will I survive the mission?
Am I really mentally able?
Find my GuArDiAn AnGeL.
Fell through the cracks
Couldn’t find my way back
Turned my LiEs into facts
Lost my faith in the scriptures, so through the tears I start to LaUgH.
Is there any structure in the design?
Will we treasure what we find?
My evaluation
Of the revelation
Of salvation.
As I fall asleep DrUnK
Talking out loud for what I want.
Listen close to what I say
Hear my illusions when I PrAy.
Just a question
About my troubled aggression.
Tears roll down my cheek
My thoughts deep
As my DeMoNs creep.
In the dark I whisper soft...
GoD?
-Xerxes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-02-26 11:35 AM

"I’m sorry though
I should have went when I had the chance to go.
Someone listening?
Am I still wishing?
Will I survive the mission?
Am I really mentally able?
Find my GuArDiAn AnGeL.
Fell through the cracks
Couldn’t find my way back
Turned my LiEs into facts"

Sounds like the kind of things that go on in my mind..without the rhyme though

I can completely relate to this..great piece and very strong!!

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

2 posted 2002-02-26 04:59 PM

"Just a question
About my troubled aggression.
Tears roll down my cheek
My thoughts deep
As my DeMoNs creep.
In the dark I whisper soft...
GoD?"

A very, very interesting, and powerful piece. I definetly enjoyed this one, my friend.

If you wish, you can email me anytime.

Sincerely,
Titus

The One, The Only... The Titus.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2002-02-28 04:23 AM

very thoughtful and reflective. i think i liked this piece out of the ones ive read of yours so far, best

...maybe someday you will find the answers to what youre looking for

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

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