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0 posted 2002-02-25 10:19 AM




Dear Christine:

I look into your eyes,
I see my reflection in the glassy tears.
A mirror image of a depressed and lost girl,
Waisting away in the "glorious" years.
Reach my hand out to you,
But u dont move a muscle towards my hand.
Too tired to be lifted from your haze,
You look at me hoping i understand.
I do underdstand and thats the thing,
I know where you are and where you've been.
The feelings you've had and the tears your cried,
The deceit, the sobs, and the roads you've taken.
I know where it all leads,
For i walked upon them too.
I know the destruction life can cause a girl,
Its happened to me as well as you.
Cant you just take my hand,
Put in a little more effort to try.
If you lay your head upon my shoulder,
I'll know exactly why.
You dont need to explain in words,
Your eyes speak a mile a minute.
No one would know better than me,
Because hun i've been in it.
Please dont push me away,
Dont decide to let it take over your being.
And if you want to for a while its ok,
But dont think you can do it without me seeing.
Tomorrow will come and so on and so forth,
You can refuse comfort and care.
But theres nothing you can do to stop me,
From always being there.

Love,
Michele


iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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1 posted 2002-02-25 03:05 PM


Wow....I know exactly how you and your friend feel...its amazing, I hope that your friend knows this...please give this poem to her.  Its beautiful, and its so truthful...

~LCBS

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2 posted 2002-02-25 04:04 PM


I actually gave it to her right after i wrote it...i walked away so i didnt see her reaction but she wrote me a note saying how she starting bawling and how she loves me and she knows im what a true friend is etc..she agreed to everything i said and she forgets that i went through the same things...hopefully things will get better

Thanks for reading!

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3 posted 2002-02-25 06:20 PM


What a great... love letter Shugah. I thought it was a perfect expression of true love and friendship. Very sweet, very nice. I enjoyed it. It stumbled a bit, but not much. Nothing that cna't be easily fixed. Another wonderful write.

Sincerely,
The Titus

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4 posted 2002-02-25 07:06 PM


thanks titus Stumbling is ok w/me..it makes it more real that way

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5 posted 2002-02-25 11:25 PM


this was great hun. perfect timing for me to read because im going through something similar. its full of emotions and love. you wrote this excellently, stubmles and all *hugS*
..tiff..

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I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

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6 posted 2002-02-25 11:27 PM


It's really sweet!
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7 posted 2002-02-26 11:27 AM


Thanks guys

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8 posted 2002-02-26 07:12 PM


This was sweet indeed...I loved it Friends are neat things.
   ~Carly

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9 posted 2002-02-27 03:25 AM


some roads are best traveled alone, but most journey's require a friend to the end.  Beautiful piece.
-Xerxes

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10 posted 2002-02-27 05:56 AM


That was gorgeous! One of the sweetest poems I've ever read!! Keep up the good work....
Luv always Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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11 posted 2002-02-27 09:47 AM


Thank you everyone for taking the time to read it and reply

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12 posted 2002-02-28 01:36 AM


Very Good.

Twas sad...but very honest.
Nice job.

Jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

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