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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-02-24 01:48 PM

Whisper softly, in my ear,
hold me close, in your arms,
lay me down upon,
that bed of roses.

Let us dream, those loving dreams,
as i watch you sleep, i think,
we fit together so perfectly upon,
that bed of roses.

Every moment we're together,
i never want it to end,
i feel so drawn to you upon,
that bed of roses.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2002-02-24 01:53 PM

A bed of roses sounds nice right now..
A great poem and expression of love
and how beautiful it can be.
Good job..

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

2 posted 2002-02-24 01:53 PM

I really like this..

gracianna
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 165
A 14 year hell

3 posted 2002-02-24 02:47 PM

I like the rhythm of this poem a lot, although I can't agree with the idea of a bed of roses. (I'm allergic to roses...)

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2002-02-24 06:19 PM

thanks all, and i'm sorry 2 hear ur allergic 2 roses

but thanks anyways

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2002-02-25 05:17 AM

The poem was well done. Pretty blunt in saying what you like and I enjoyed that. The poem was simply put, and nicely said. Hope to see more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

gracianna
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 165
A 14 year hell

6 posted 2002-02-25 09:37 AM

lol. Oh well. I'll just substitute in daisies or something. Still a great read, though!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2002-02-25 10:05 AM

What a beautiful picture you painted..very romantic as well

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

8 posted 2002-03-01 08:19 PM

i want a bed of roses!!!! haha lol this was a really good poem..im thinkin u know wuts good for you now, only u can realize that and make ur self a better person emotionally and mentally..love u mon! hope u's stay my happy nbh!! lylan ~Jessibaca

~*~The hardest thing to do is watch someone you love, love someone else~*~

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

9 posted 2002-03-06 05:30 AM

Awww this is a really sweet piece!

Makes me smile that alot of people out there feel this way!!! Just makes me wish I could too!!!

~I thought it was only your loss when we broke up, but it turns out it was mine too~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (03-06-2002 05:32 AM).]

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