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LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
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0 posted 2002-02-24 01:40 AM


sleep escapes me yet again
This is getting quite redundant
I long for sweet childhood dreams
that were once so abundant
The clock is ticking much to quickly
But time has seemed to halt
Tomorrow mornings coming soon
My body is running on default
Tired eyes of slits with bags
sunken  deep into my face
make a look of desperation
Sleep I long to embrace
tomorrOW I Will stumble through
another exhausting day
but at night no sleep will come
For my sleep has run away
Exhaustion takes its toll
I am very aware
But Insomnia makes great poems
So sleep I can spare


Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

[This message has been edited by LCBS (02-24-2002 01:43 AM).]

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gracianna
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A 14 year hell
1 posted 2002-02-24 02:00 AM


Having trouble sleeping? Or are you on western time, as I am? Anyway, hope you get to sleep before your  alarm goes off. Trust me, the world looks a lot grimmer on only a few hours of sleep. (especially if you have to go to Jr. High...)
LCBS
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2 posted 2002-02-24 12:16 PM


Yes I was having trouble sleeping...but the world is grim on 8 hours or 2 hours.  And I remember Jr. High, it was a lot nicer than High School, at least my high school *shudder*

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

gracianna
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A 14 year hell
3 posted 2002-02-24 05:36 PM


lol...
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4 posted 2002-02-25 10:04 AM


Insomnia definately makes great poems!! This im guessing is an example of one Nice write and hope 2night you have a better sleep

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Raven Skye
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5 posted 2002-02-25 02:37 PM


Very nice poem... I like...

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

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