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LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
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0 posted 2002-02-23 11:54 PM


Run away with me tonight
Rescue me before its to late
carry me off on horseback
battle the clock, battle my fate

Run away to a far off place
to castles, to fairytales
be my Knight in shining armor
defeat the dragon, hero prevails

Carry me off to magical forests
Protect me from the evil beasts
call around your loyal subjects
Be ready for welcome home feasts

Bask with me in sunfilled spaces
Pick flowers in the colorful pastures
swim with me beneath waterfalls
run with me, avoiding capture

Run away with me tonight
Save me from nomality
take me to my Camelot
Be my escape from reality

*I have to credit Kristen with the Camelot idea, she set my mind in motion a couple weeks ago, and so bgan my daydreams...

Thanks Kris




Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

[This message has been edited by LCBS (02-24-2002 01:24 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-24 12:08 PM


Knights and white stallions...what beautiful images..wouldnt it just be great if we could escape reality with a prince or something??

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Kandi
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2 posted 2002-02-24 12:47 PM


I really enjoyed this poem, especially the last line about escaping reality...when we're little we imagine these fairytale lives and then as we get older we stop believing in that because it just sounds silly....it'd be nice if more people didn't outgrow that part of childhood. Awesome job

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

gracianna
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since 2002-02-17
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A 14 year hell
3 posted 2002-02-24 12:54 PM


boy, wouldn't that be nice...*drifts off into daydream*
cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
4 posted 2002-02-28 04:57 AM


does sound so romantic doesnt it? it would have been a nice valentines!

Zombie

Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)
Shadow

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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5 posted 2002-02-28 07:58 PM


I so loved this!! and your welcome..err *coughs* I hope I didn't freak you out, by emailing you..*runs off* take care okay and I'm so printing this out!! lovely just amazingly wonderful!!

Kris

TigerZ
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since 2002-01-02
Posts 83
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2002-02-28 10:38 PM


=) awesome poem once again...=) i love horses and knights and dragons and magic and oh i just simply loved this one =) thank you so much

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