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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
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Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2002-02-23 09:40 PM



As the eyes upon a new day
I wish I were invisble
another wasted day
roaming through the corridors
another message on the wall
another bulletin in the metro station
"la suicide n'est pas la reponse!Telephone pour
l'aide"
I'm so tired....so dizzy
This so-called party life is not that great
how many more months till one of us OD's?
we are all tired
toss and turning in our sleep
another day of grief for a lost friend
one more day of guilt for my sins
a month more of happiness under pretense
there is no fear


well that was a really bad poem, its not  done yet. i probaly wont finsih it but whatever

[This message has been edited by Ina (02-23-2002 09:41 PM).]

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gracianna
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since 2002-02-17
Posts 165
A 14 year hell
1 posted 2002-02-23 10:51 PM


J'ai aime cette poesie beaucoup. Elle a partage avec chacun exactement comment vous vous etes sentis...

For those of you who don't know the beautiful language:

have like this poem much. It shows everyone exactly how you felt...
(by the way, by French isn't all that great, and my keyboard doesn't have the accents, so...)

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2 posted 2002-02-23 11:55 PM


this was such an awesome poem INA and im so happy to see you posting....the thought "how long until me or one of my friends OD's" always pops into my head..one time is just gonna be crossing the line and you never know when that is and its scary...i enjoyed this a lot and i hope you do add more on to it but if not then its fine as it is

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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