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gracianna
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A 14 year hell

0 posted 2002-02-23 02:54 PM


There once was s girl who was blue,
Flowing down from her hair to her shoe.
But she made a mistake,
And she looked like a fake,
And now it's her stylist she'll sue.



I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

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Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2002-02-23 03:00 PM


I actually needed to read this, put in my in a better mood...it was witty and it really did crack a smile on my face...

Kristen

gracianna
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A 14 year hell
2 posted 2002-02-23 03:10 PM


That's good!
Kandi
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3 posted 2002-02-24 01:28 AM


I kept telling myself I'd only read one more poem before i went to bed...about 15 poems later i found this one and decided this would be the last one i read because it put a smile on my face. So I'm going to go to sleep on a happy note and call it a day. Thank you for that.

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

gracianna
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A 14 year hell
4 posted 2002-02-24 02:12 AM


sure...anytime...
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5 posted 2002-02-25 05:18 AM


I liked this one. Made me smile

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

gracianna
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A 14 year hell
6 posted 2002-02-25 09:36 AM



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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
7 posted 2002-02-25 10:03 AM


Cute poem gracianna

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

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8 posted 2002-02-25 01:11 PM


Nice poem, I like it!!

"I'm not afraid of anything in this world,
there's nothing you can throw at me, that I haven't already heard"

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