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0 posted 2002-02-22 05:45 PM


why am i so blue when i talk to you?
my heart aches knowing that i can't have you.
my mind spins making me dizzy about you.

why am i so blue when i talk to you?
i sit in my chair thinking of you.
that's when the tears come.

why am i so blue when i talk to you?
why did you hurt me like you did?
i thought you really liked me.
i guess i was wrong.

why am i so blue when i talk to you?
i do all that i can to make you like me.
i become you just in a girl form.
i wear what you wear.

why am i so blue when i talk to you?
because i see you and me,
together forever.
but then you push me away.
why?
are you scared?

i hate being blue when i talk to you.

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him DROOLZ*

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1 posted 2002-02-22 06:47 PM


Robin,
honey....love hurts sometimes.....I'm sorry he is being retarded right now....maybe he is afraid of falling in love....???? This poem made me want to cry, and it made me remember.....(((hugs))) for you

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2 posted 2002-02-22 08:30 PM


I know how you feel..My man is doing the same to me..when I talk to him..we are just friends..but he acts like we are still a couple..he asked me back out yesterday..and now..he is leaving me again(I think)..Hold in there..like I am trying..please?
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3 posted 2002-02-23 11:58 AM


Im so sorry that your blue...you expressed your feelings and your situation well through the poem though. I hope you start to feel better soon!!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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4 posted 2002-02-24 04:52 AM


i don't know if i will ever be the same again this guy really hurt me grrrrr

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him DROOLZ*

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5 posted 2002-02-28 05:17 AM


awwwwwwwwwwwww*hugs*....paint your face red or purple...or polka dot it yellow!...then you wont be so blue.. ...give it time hun, then it wont hurt so much

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By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
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6 posted 2002-02-28 05:29 PM


Awwwwwww Robin I'm so sorry you're having to go through this. Patience in love is a hard thing... protecting your heart while being open to love is also a battle. I enjoyed the poem. Again, check your email.

Enjoyed this line much: "i hate being blue when i talk to you."

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7 posted 2002-03-01 05:39 AM


TKS I THINK THE POKLA DOTS ARE A GOOD CHOICE CHERRY LOL

beware i am hated bye everyone don't talk to me i might ruin your reputation!!

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