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sleepymoongirl
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0 posted 2002-02-21 07:28 PM


slowly letting every day eat away at you
not sure how to live any other way
having had this pain haunt you all your life
will this pain ever go away?

feeling so worthless
feeling so all alone
not sure what to do
thinking its all your fault
no one seems to be able to help
or even understand

wanting someone to talk to
wanting to get rid of the pain she feels inside
not sure about where to start

slowly her soul slides away
there is nothing left but an empty shell
not sure how to be happy
its been so long

hoping i can help to find your way
knowing that i can't
heal the pain that has followed you on your path
but i can be there

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

© Copyright 2002 Scarlet Saunders - All Rights Reserved
Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...
1 posted 2002-02-21 07:32 PM


wow, i could feel this one. great job!

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
2 posted 2002-02-22 02:29 PM


Sometimes that is all you can do.
Good job!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

DawnG
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3 posted 2002-02-22 02:49 PM


Great job of relaying your message. Thanks for sharing.

                Dawn

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