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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2002-02-20 02:30 AM



SITTING
with myself
THINKING
about myself
REMEMBERING
by myself
LYING
to myself

FIGHTING
with myself
LAUGHING
about myself
REMEMBERING
by myself
CRYING
to myself

Thank you for your time :shy:

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

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Wood_Stock
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since 2001-05-09
Posts 58
The little yellow
1 posted 2002-02-20 05:00 AM


Sweet.

I love these simple "poems", I use the quotations because they are more like thoughts... but then, what's a poem?

Everything is open to interpretation hey?!

I really liked this one too, and I'm surprised I have the honor of wrting the first reply!  heh heh.

Anyway, as I have nothing constructive to say, I'll shut up now!

keep up the good work.

Wood_Stock

if you flap hard enough, who's to say you won't fly?

Deep_Inside
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Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
2 posted 2002-02-20 02:39 PM


i wrote this poem when i had run away from home so it's kinda of my litle glimpse of the real would out of my parents controll.  i was depressed when i wrote this

Thank you for your time :shy:

when you live you die
when you die your forgotten
when your forgotten you truly die

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
3 posted 2002-02-20 06:58 PM


you definately express your inner pain very well through your words. This piece is strong and well written.

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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