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0 posted 2002-02-18 05:08 PM



Languish

I can’t be friends with you
I love your friendship but it’s not true.
Wanting more I try to hide
Being with you having no pride
I lay my body on the line
But everyday all I do is pine
For your love, I hope to myself you may want more
But all this does is make me feel poor
I may have possessions but I want your love

As your friend I will have to someday see you with someone new,
And this is a thing I don’t think I can do
I know it’s selfish but I want you to be mine
Is to love someone really such a crime?
I wish I could get over you
And be you friend as I really want to
But at the moment the pain is too much
Not being with you being unable to touch

It’s so hard to sit back and know you don’t feel the same
I know your probably fed up I’m doing it again
But I don’t think I will see you for a while
And when I’m ready I’ll pick up the telephone, and dia

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

© Copyright 2002 Clare Griffiths - All Rights Reserved
gracianna
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since 2002-02-17
Posts 165
A 14 year hell
1 posted 2002-02-18 05:43 PM


wow....this is very well written!

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2002-02-18 06:53 PM


Aww.  Hey, I know how you feel, I'm going through the same thing.  It hurts to see them with someone else.  Hang in there.  Great poem by the way!

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

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