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babygurl *
Junior Member

since 2001-12-07

Posts 30

0 posted 2002-02-18 02:17 AM

September, October, the darkness grows
The chill winter wind wraps her in its arms
Freezing the teardrops
Never to melt the ice in her veins

Remembering the joy they once shared
She looks in the mirror and no one is there
The ending, so swift, yet, love's still alive
The past is the present, it can't be denied

Spoken for then... but no longer needed
A heart in two pieces, cut so deep
A love, she thought, they were meant to keep
She knows her heart will never be free

Never to love again
She reflects on the past
Soft flowers in a datebook
From a happier time

The voice that caressed
The love that enflamed
Words, remembered with a sad smile
Hopes for a future, that wasn't to be

Not understanding, this twist to destiny
The sunset loses its beauty
The wind carries her away
Another end to a long lonely day

Blue eyes watching the darkness
She sits through the night
Wondering why... Oh why
Must his memory linger .......

This has nothing really to do with whats going on in my life i just like the poem... my friends and i wrote it a very long time ago.... VERY long time ago

[This message has been edited by babygurl * (02-20-2002 02:47 PM).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2002-02-18 02:26 AM

Good work!!! I dont know why but this part really caught my attention more then the rest did.

Not understanding, this twist to destiny
The sunset loses its beauty
The wind carries her away
Another end to a long lonely day

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-02-18 01:44 PM

This was such a good post!!! Nicely done and keep em coming!!!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

babygurl *
Junior Member

since 2001-12-07

Posts 30

3 posted 2002-02-18 03:36 PM

thanks guys.. great reply's.. this poem is about two of my friends who were going out and then they broke up and then i wrote that poem... then they started going out again... its a really screwed up story... but yeah

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

4 posted 2002-02-20 11:24 PM

Hey, Jackie! You're a great poet! Your writing style is simple---yet...beautiful! It's hard to explain! Just---keep writing poetry...one day, babe---you'll be a star!!!

Lol, and call me!!!

Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth...

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico