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HiddenSparklez
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0 posted 2002-02-17 02:15 AM



~Something I just wrote on the spot...

I feel like I've been blindsided by the hands who have lifted me from time & time again
I forgot the words of our oath
Don't you fully understand,
I am the only person who reads right through you

Nobody dragged time above their heads
But yet we bend till seasons change
And we're always silent

I have reasons not to talk
And you have reasons to ignore
But every second day,
Who's there when you awake?
My shoulder has a chip,
But it's always home for your head

And yet those goggles you have on,
Are always fogged up
Because the one who you really need,
Has always been me

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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1 posted 2002-02-17 10:19 AM


this is really good for "on the spot" I like the ending best
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