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ScrpyCJ
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since 2002-06-24
Posts 9


0 posted 2002-06-27 02:20 PM


I don't know what to say,
My lips are welded shut,
My love for you will always grow and yet your slipping by,
I tell you each and every day,
I want to hold you near my heart,
I told you from the start I wanted more than just the love,
My love for you is strong and deep,
I wish this moment could last forever,
Say you love me just one time,
my heart will then shatter.

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cutiepiesugarbabie
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 110
A Cloud In the Sky
1 posted 2002-06-27 05:40 PM


good poem-meh romance sucks

o*~Everyone makes mistakes-get over them and make more tomorrow!~*o

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Member Rara Avis
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Twilight Zone
2 posted 2002-07-03 09:44 AM


this is very sweet but still includes a feeling of tragedy.  hope things are good with you.  thanks for sahring and hoping to see more in the future.

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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