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Baby_Angel123
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0 posted 2002-02-16 11:08 AM


You think,
that your're invisible,
and not heard.

That your ignored,
and not seen,
but you are.

Just because,
one person,
doesn't act like,
they see you,
doesn't mean that,
they didn't notice you.

For they have,
and are just,
to afraid,
to let you know.

So don't,
ever fell like,
you arn't,
herd nor seen.

Cause in fact,
you are heard,
and seen.

This is dedicated to a dear friend of mine.

[This message has been edited by Baby_Angel123 (02-17-2002 01:34 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Heather - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-16 07:23 PM


it's good to give friends some confidence
be at his/her side at all times
that's what friends are for
one thing bothered me though, spelling check
herd=heard
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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2 posted 2002-02-17 12:30 PM


This would be a great thing to give my boyfriend..sounds like something he should read to help his self-esteem...i liked this a lot..nicely done

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

HiddenSparklez
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3 posted 2002-02-17 02:05 AM


Good to hear that you've come to a certain perspective in your life where you have found out that just because things happen a certain way, it doesn't mean it has to drag you down. Good poem!

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Devils Angel 666
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4 posted 2002-02-17 03:42 PM


Good poem my love.  I'm sorry it's taken me a while to see this.  I haven't been online lately as you know.  Good poem.  I still say that our "good Friend" is doing this for attention.  He is interested in the wrong people for him as you know and they are the reason he is like this.  He doesn't look at the person as a whole. Hes only looking at the out side and not the inside which is his problem.
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5 posted 2002-02-17 06:16 PM


I hope you gave this to your friend. We all need to be reminded of this once in a while.

                              Dawn

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