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0 posted 2002-02-16 07:39 AM




A million love songs go through my head
As I sit all alone upon my bed
Simple words of simple tunes
Prick my heart, which bursts like balloons
The beat of the drum is the beat of my heart
To which you own the tiniest part
The thin line between love and hate,
Is what you caused me to create
I hide my misery from my mother
I wish I still could see my brother
He would know what I could do
To defeat the hurt gained seeing you
You seemed as important as my belief
To which I nearly laid a wreath
But I realised you wouldn’t be there
Always when I feel despair
In my faith I forever will boast
The Father, Son and Holy Ghost.



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1 posted 2002-02-16 09:40 AM


i'm sorry 2 hear ur hurting like this, but this wuz a good poem. keep up the nice owrk.


~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (02-16-2002 09:41 AM).]

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2 posted 2002-02-16 10:21 AM


I liked the flow of this and the way you expressed yourself...
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3 posted 2002-02-17 12:36 PM


Your emotions flowed so nicely but i am sorry to see that your emotions are pain and hurt ::hugs:: i hope you feel better soon

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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