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Teen Poetry #5
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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
Minnesota
0 posted 2002-02-15 06:05 PM


2/15/02

I wonna love you boy
Please give me a chance
To give you love that'll last
My heart aches for you.

I wonna love you boy
Hope you'll wipe the tears away
That you'll take away the pain
Your smile will warm my day.

I wonna love you boy
The days I think of you
I'll miss your touch your kisses
Like the sun.

I wonna love you boy
To grown old with you
Die with you in your arms
Cradeld with love tight.

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥
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Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
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1 posted 2002-02-15 10:04 PM

Very nice poem. I can relate to this poem in with my girl friend.  We have both told each other and promissed that we will grow old with each other and die together.  Hope everything works out with you and the other.

~Dan
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2 posted 2002-02-15 11:14 PM

I liked the repetitive first line, very nicely said and done
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3 posted 2002-02-17 12:28 PM

Truly written whole heartedly... Nicely done and i hope you get to love him forever

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"
Lennon2002
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since 2002-01-10
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4 posted 2002-02-17 12:36 PM

awwwww!!

~Time you enjoy wasting was not wasted.~ John Lennon
~I don't believe in death because I'm ready for it- John Lennon
Erin
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5 posted 2002-02-20 06:35 AM

Good poem!!! Sounds like you found yourself someone special!!!

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~
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