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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
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0 posted 2002-02-15 06:05 PM


2/14/02

Today I care for you...
Tommorrow I cherish you...
Tonight I think of you...
In my head I dream of you...
Forever I love you...

Today I'll hold your hand
Never to let go...
Tommorrow I'm beside you...
Tonight I'll cry with you...
Forever I love you...

Today I'll smile at you...
Tommorrow I protect you...
Tonight my memories flow of you...
Forever I love you...

Today my heart reaches for you...
Tommorrow I'll hug you tight
Tonight I wrote about you...
Forever I love you...

Today you my friend
Tommorrow you my sister
Tonight your my survivor
Forever i love you...

Today I'll warm you with rays
From the sun light
Tommorrow I miss you
Tonight I pray for you...
Forever I love you...

Today the rainbow bright
Tommorrow mist sweet hiding
You from harm
Tonight warters magical
Forever I love you...

Today I will make your wishes
Come true
Tommorrow I'll give you my world
Tonight I'll understand your
Need
Forever I love you...

Today the sun shall rise
Tommorrow the birds will sing
Tonight the moon will shine
Forever I love you...

Today butterfiles will
Color your soul
Tommorrow flowers have giving
Their trust
Tonight fireflies dance for you
Forever I love you...

Today tommorrow tonight
Forever I love you...


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1 posted 2002-02-16 10:53 PM


-inspiredpoetwriter-

Aw, this was sweet. A perfect poem for Valentine's Day. -smiles-

The way you repeated:
{Forever I love you...} after each stanza, it reminded me that love is consistant, and here, in this poem, you were consistant. It was a nice touch.

Thanks for sharing! Hope to read more from you!


Q.u.e.t.h.

Everything in between...
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2 posted 2002-02-17 12:19 PM


Beautifully written!!! I love how you expressed your love for the person for eternity without actually saying the word but referring to different days Nicely done and i liked ur technique!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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