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LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

0 posted 2002-02-15 03:49 PM

Today I felt what heart break was
and it hurt so much inside
I just swallowed up my pain
And held my head with pride

But my heart could not help hurting
And although I tried to run
there was no escape from the pain
This battle heartbreak won

But no heart can hide from sadness
and no eyes can hide from tears
my soul can't hide from heartbreak
Only laugh at it in years

I Know it had to happen once
But it will happen many times
But I guess this is adolescence
and it makes for great rhymes
~LCBS

[This message has been edited by LCBS (02-16-2002 03:40 PM).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2002-02-15 04:31 PM

Good poem here!!! Broken hearts are the worst. I actually just had my first heartbreak...And it sucks...But guys are different from girls...When girls have a broken heart they tell their friends all about it and cry...Good for you for being strong!!!

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

2 posted 2002-02-15 04:41 PM

i like this one i really did i mean i know what it's like to have your hart broken, and haveing just such a sinking feeling you just have to hide it. and doesn't really help with writing poems. you might new at this but you do have a tallent keep up the good work and don't let anyone put you down for writing poems it's a gift

inspiredpoetwriter
Member

since 2002-01-05

Posts 104
Minnesota

3 posted 2002-02-15 05:56 PM

Hey! This poem tiz really good i loved it alot i hope it didnt realy happen to u gurl i hope ur ok! If u wonna talk i'm here..bye!

0:)

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

chas
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

4 posted 2002-02-15 08:37 PM

great poem, shows you have alot of character and great writing abilities.. lesson to all, unless your over 21, remind yourself that you will not find love at your age for it does not exist yet..

mateusz
New Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 7

5 posted 2002-02-15 09:07 PM

I really liked your poem and im sorry if it happened to you. bad things happen but they lead to good in the end.

[This message has been edited by mateusz (02-15-2002 09:08 PM).]

LucidityNow
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 118
Canada

6 posted 2002-02-15 09:29 PM

A broken heart is like a broken arm. You put a cast on it, and it is useless for a long time. You try not to use it, and it doesnt feel right with the cast on. Then one day something happens and you decide its time to take the cast off and try it out. Everything is akward at first, but it feels great to be using it again, and you can get on with your life. But sometimes if you take the cast off too soon, the arm is not healed, and it still hurts, so you must give it more time. But eventually with time, everything heals. Wow am i ever rambling. Great poem though.

and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

Devils Angel 666
Member

since 2001-11-30

Posts 71
CT, USA

7 posted 2002-02-15 09:38 PM

Great poem LCBS. I like this one. Very well put together. I'm sorry you had to go through that. If you want to talk about it My e-mail is maddog6766@aol.com and I can give you my Screen name to talk to you on if you have Aim. I could never imagain to put anyone through that kind of "Hell."

~Dan

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2002-02-17 12:35 PM

Aww sweety ::hugs:: I am so sorry that your heart has been broken. Remember though, what doesnt kill us only makes us stronger.

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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