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aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

0 posted 2002-02-15 04:27 AM

Ya I'm a day too late but I'm going to post it anyway.

I wish to tell you how I feel
I wish to tell you, yes I do
I wish I could but reveal
just how I've grown to care for you

My secret Valentine, I do proclaim to thee
I care for your smile, given free and warmly
the joy it brings to my heart, I simply cannot contain
and though the moon may change, my ardor will wax, never wane
My Valentine, if I could but tell you the truth
myself and this poem would not seem so uncouth

My secret Valentine, let me speak of your eyes
of stars that sparkle bright, and twilight fields of fireflies
of snowy mountain peaks, and sunlit ocean expanse fair
before your eyes, these sights incredible, cannot compare
My Valentine, how I wish to hold you so near
to hold you close and whisper words sweet and sincere

My secret Valentine, I yearn to be yours too
but you have someone else to whom you hang onto
someone who makes you laugh, and someone who holds you tight
someone whom you adore, and someone by your side at night
My Valentine, I hope he treats you sweet and tender
by easing your pain, amid his midnight whisper

Though I wish it to be different
he makes you happy as no other
and with your smile I must be content
to watch your relationship flower.

God, Valentine's day sucks doesn't it??

ex animo,
Aaron

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-02-15 01:42 PM

Yes valentines day does suck in a lot of ways...but i think this poem was really good..nicely done and better late then never

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2002-02-15 07:02 PM

It is better late then never esspecially such a great piece. Thanks for sharing it I really hope to read more of your work!!!

P.S. What part of Illinois are you from????

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (02-15-2002 07:02 PM).]

inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05

Posts 104
Minnesota

3 posted 2002-02-15 07:13 PM

hihi love da poem itz really well "WOWWIE" n yes v-day do sux!

read mah poems plz

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

4 posted 2002-02-15 11:50 PM

This is a very well written poem. I can completely relate to this . . . Great job!

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

5 posted 2002-02-15 11:51 PM

This is well written!!

Great job here!

~~Jeff~~

-Queth-
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since 2002-02-10

Posts 35
Canada

6 posted 2002-02-16 10:47 PM

-aaron woodside-

Wow, what a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed this! -smile- The flow and the rhyme were great, and suited the poem so well.

It's nice to read a poem such as this. Thanks for sharing! -smiles-

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