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trapped in my mind
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 8


0 posted 2002-02-14 07:30 PM



when im with you guys its so easy to overlook it
when im alone its hard to not think about it
but dont you see whats happening
its just a face thats been plastered on
i want to be cared about
i want to be thought of
but with you its so hard to tell you
because we joke so much
it could just be another one of my jokes
but maybe just maybe
you would think im the joke
dont you see whats going on?

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LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
Posts 532
Connecticut
1 posted 2002-02-14 08:04 PM


Tell them, it helps, let it out...

Great Post

~LCBS

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2002-02-18 02:06 AM


Its better to get things out before everything just gathers up inside of you...Sounds like you are scared to tell anyone how you are feeling...Talking about it does help...Thanks for sharing this!!!

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
3 posted 2002-02-18 01:45 PM


Tought situation...i think you should maybe try and tell him...i think that would be the best thing

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 157
bc canada
4 posted 2002-02-19 12:50 PM


liked the poem twas short and sweet

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

gracianna
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since 2002-02-17
Posts 165
A 14 year hell
5 posted 2002-02-19 01:25 AM


I like it. It is how a lot of people feel, though everyone feels slightly different about their "masks"

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

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