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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2002-02-14 07:00 PM



Being Away From You

Tears falling,
Like the spring time rain.
I cry for love,
For heartache and pain.
Those feelings felt so good,
Now they bring tears.
I don’t know what went bad,
I can’t wait till this clears.
My eyes are foggy,
From crying so long.
Being away from you,
It feels so wrong.
I’m so bored,
Bored out of my mind.
I’m afraid to look around,
For I don’t know what I’ll find.

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

© Copyright 2002 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2002-02-14 07:08 PM


*hugs you* Your words reflect what I know oh so well, but please don't be afraid, I do hope things work out for you, I know it's easier said than done, but hehe I admit I can be soo stubborn with pain and laugh at another person's optimistic poa but it does pass eventually if you want it too

Kristen

LCBS
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2 posted 2002-02-14 08:13 PM


I feel the same way about certain people....I can't give you advice, because I dont know what to say..

~LCBS

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

trapped in my mind
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3 posted 2002-02-14 08:15 PM


great post i dont know what else to say just great post
Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
4 posted 2002-02-14 08:42 PM


thanks 4 the replies, they were much appreciated

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

peachesNcream
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Ocean Of Tears
5 posted 2002-02-14 08:54 PM


Dis was a weally good poem..i liked it lots keep writing much wuv <3Jessibaca<3

life sux

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6 posted 2002-02-15 01:57 PM


Ahh yes i can relate...::hugs:: i know how you feel. Im sorry that you are away from this person and i know its difficult but it will get better in time...

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2002-02-19 03:47 PM


It will pass Stac....it ain't easy, but it does pass.....but if you look inside....you will find it alot quicker....(remember I'm the queen of this subject!!  lmao!!)
Hugs to you sweetie.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-19-2002 03:48 PM).]

Honey
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Hot girl From Canada
8 posted 2002-02-19 11:51 PM


oh wow I dont even know what to say besides beautiful and library!

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

C?
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9 posted 2002-02-20 12:49 PM


BRAVO, BRAVO...,
hehe, no honestly, I really liked this, I see this topic posted so often around here, but this was posted with such a charm, I liked it quite a bit!

Erin
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10 posted 2002-02-20 05:09 AM


Having a heartache is the worst feeling someone could ever have...But theres always someone out there that could help it go away...Great poem!!!

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
11 posted 2002-02-21 06:08 PM


thanks agen, the replies are the best parts of the poem. bye

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

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