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Being loved |
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mateusz New Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 7 |
Being loved is something we take for granted, its not every day we find love , like a pen in the hall while going to class. People whoo have this should hold on to it and remember that it can slip away at any moment. Being loved is being able to hold on to someone special in those cold winter nights. Its being able to take to this person who looks at you when you speak, and understands what you are saying. This person feels what you feel. Hopefully everyone will experience being loved. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Love is a beautiful thing! I agree with you on this one, I like how you expressed yourself clearly and in a readable way. Welcome to PIP see ya around! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PIP!!!!!! This was very nicely written. Cant wait to read more of your work! mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
 Welcome to PIP! Love is a good thing when we're in it but when we're not, we have an urge to beat up Cupid.  I think you should break your piece up a bit so it reads a bit easier. Hope to see you around here a lot more. Enjoy it here.  ~AF~ ::Most people never listen:: |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! Love is a precious thing....very well said Please check your email for a special greeting!! |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
Very true, love is very presious but as quick as it arrives it can be taken away so cherish what you have you never know when it may disappear. Great write Love Clare x Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Yes, love is something taken for granted by too many people. For all of you who are in love now, treat each day with that person as if it were the only day, never put off anything until tomorrow, for it can all be gone in the blink of an eye. After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it. |
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gracianna Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 165A 14 year hell |
love...a complicated word...some of us have never experienced it... I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.' |
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laconic Member
since 2002-02-17
Posts 64Melbourne, Australia |
love is over-rated.. opps.. i meant over-stated. alotta ppl are just looking for security .. like having a gf or bf makes u a better person more conformed person. and others are just horny and need someone to play with.. ppl come ppl go..those who stay are the ones that love you and deserve you. but yeah i've forgotten the point to this post everybody finds who their lookin for eventually...the journey to that person is that rocky road ... so chill... you'll get where ur goin my inspiration has drained like perspiration ..again i'm empty like hemp i been smoked dry...*sigh* [This message has been edited by laconic (02-19-2002 06:05 AM).] |
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