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vlraynes
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0 posted 2002-02-14 02:48 AM



For those of you who don't know what's going on, NO..I haven't lost my mind...well...not completely..LOL.
I started a thread, in the Teen Chat Forum, asking
for inspiration for my muse.  Well, Robin's suggestiion,
was that I write about jello or Taco Bell.  So...I
decided to write about both!  LOL!  My muse is desperate!
Can you tell??
I'd love to have all of you come and add your words
or phrases of inspiration to the thread, and join in
the challenge as well.  The title of the thread is 'Come on...I dare you...', and here's the link for you...
/pip/Forum40/HTML/000799.html
Okay...now for the jello and Taco Bell poem...lol.
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~Yo Quiero Taco Bell~

I've been sticking to my diet
and I'm doing pretty well
But today I'm just so tempted
to give in to Taco Bell

Now, most days I'll eat jello
and that's usually just swell
But today I've got this craving
got to have some Taco Bell

Yes jello is delicious
but it takes so long to gel
I can feel my stomach growling
Yo quiero taco bell!!

~vraynes

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

© Copyright 2002 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
Erin
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1 posted 2002-02-14 02:59 AM


That a really different poem. Put a smile on my face. Im glad you posted a poem that could do that!!!

~I didnt want you when I had you and now that you are gone I would do anything to have you here with me again~

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2002-02-14 03:03 AM



ERIN-
Thanks much!  Glad this gave you a smile.
Definitely NOT a great poem, but it was fun to write..LOL.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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3 posted 2002-02-14 05:12 AM


Wow... I really like the humour and the simplicity in this poem... *Goes off to get some inspiring thoughts*... Anyway well done a nice change of pace

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anonymousfemale
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4 posted 2002-02-14 06:22 AM


LOL!

Marvellous, Vicky. Worth a good laugh.

Thanks for the read. Much enjoyed.

~AF~

::Most people never listen::
Ernest Hemingway

Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2002-02-14 07:10 PM


This is soo cute..hehehe and witty!! thats all I can really say sorry

Kristen

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6 posted 2002-02-20 03:49 AM


HeyLittleBuddy~
What's this ?
I'm gone a few days and drive by the Taco Bell and see you *Chihuahua-ing* out~

You are a trip and a half~
aMUSE-ing indeed ~
*Hugs*
~*Senorita Margarita*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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