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LCBS
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since 2001-11-29
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0 posted 2002-02-13 03:29 PM


Promise me...

Promise me
you will never go to bed
hating yourself
because what if you never woke up
Promise me
you will never go to bed
with something to say
Because you never spoke up

Promise me

You will live life to the fullest
you will never regret
you will look towards the future
but you will never forget

Promise me

You will ask when you need me
You will do the best you can
You will realize your lucky
You will try to understand

Promise me...

Promise me
You will never go to bed
wanting to die
because you never know about tomorrow
Promise me
You will never go to bed
With tears in your eyes
Because nothing is worth your sorrow

Promise me...

Exeryone makes mistake, learn from them and move on, because tomorrow we'll make more...

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TigerZ
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since 2002-01-02
Posts 83
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2002-02-13 05:25 PM


=)cool...i absolutely loved this =) keep up the good work

A life without loveā€¦is no life at all.

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2 posted 2002-02-13 07:47 PM


this was special, i did enjoy it very much!

Wonderful writing!

~~Jeff~~

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3 posted 2002-02-14 01:26 AM


I hate having anyone go away from me mad cause you never know what tomorrow brings. If only everyone promised the things you wish for.
I loved this poem and its message.

                   Dawn

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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4 posted 2002-02-15 12:18 PM



LCBS-
This is very well penned, and such a warm
and caring message as well.
A wonderful write...much enjoyed.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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5 posted 2002-02-17 12:44 PM


This was so good hun!! my mommy always told me not to go to bed angry...it brough back a lot of memories reading this

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA
6 posted 2002-02-17 03:48 PM


Very good poem!! I should make on mf my friends read this.  Has a strong message in it that everyone should read and know.
Very good poem again.  I liked it alot.
Keep up the good writing!!

~Dan

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
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7 posted 2002-02-20 05:19 AM


Im so used to reading about love & broken hearts that i thought this was gonna be one of those...I know im one to write about just that...But this was a really great poem!!! I hope to see more like this soon!!!

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

Erin
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~Chicago~
8 posted 2002-02-20 05:22 AM


I forgot to add this to my library...

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

gracianna
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Posts 165
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9 posted 2002-02-23 10:55 PM


I likes this one...

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

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