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sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
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0 posted 2002-02-12 05:30 PM



so very afraid of being alone
yet knowing its probably for the best
having all these expections
when i never feel i'm good enough
feeling so vulnerable
now that my shell is gone
i have nothing to hide behind
thinking i was ready
crying for no good reason
feeling so lost in this world
not knowing how to express
in words how i really feel
everyone just walks right past me
not knowing what to do
to make them see me
to make them care
to not feel so very alone

i'm sorry you guyz i've been feeling so out of it latley like i have no place in the world i'm  trying to face my problems and it hurts so much thank you for reading my poem

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

© Copyright 2002 Scarlet Saunders - All Rights Reserved
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
1 posted 2002-02-12 06:57 PM


Aww.. I'm sorry you feel that way, I've been there before.  Never a good feeling.  I don't profess to know much about the details of your life, but I know one thing, there is always someone who cares.  This is a good, if sad poem.  As for thanking us for reading, it's not a problem at all.  Hope you cheer up!

                                                                                                                         -Rich

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

DawnG
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2 posted 2002-02-12 11:50 PM


Scarlet,

You are never alone. You have friends here at Pip. Hope things get better soon. Great poem to get out your feelings.

                                 Dawn

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