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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
im at a loss for words never knowing what to say i know you are right there and my mind just draws a blank my feelings for you surpass anything i've ever known i love you so much but you're so far away short visits aren't enough i want you here with me it should be enough that i'll be there someday the time passes so slowly just creeping on its own a few months won't come along but will i be ready when they do? i'll leave everything behind just to be there with you will you love me still when i'm there by your side? is this just your way of leaving your past behind do you love me as much as i simply do for you? i'm so scared of my future yet even more so of my past i never knew how tired i was but then i found you i hope this isn't a mistake that this is my path in life i'm coming to be with you would you come to be with me? “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Tiffany, I love this poem. It is absolutely beautiful. I also love your signature. Did you write that quote, or find it somewhere? Dawn |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Dawn, My first signature is from a book I read in 1997 I believe. It has always been one of my favourite quotes. ~ The second one is a line from a song by DIDO. I can't remember which song it was though. Sorry. Thank you for your reply. It means alot to me. Tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is a beautiful write Tiff hmmm, you're getting better and better hope to see more in the future thanks for the wonderful read là où est mon amour? |
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sad brown eyes Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 19Connecticut U.S |
that poem reminds me of me and my bf i love it |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
*shares her views* Or something. Great poem! Didn't look at the date you posted it..maybe I'm late with this reply, and you'll never even see it..but ya know. Yeah. Good job expressing emotions..or expressing your confusion, maybe? Well, luv ya girly! Keep on writing. __o0o_Anna_o0o__ *HugZieS & WaveZieS* Friends r angels who lift u 2 ur feet when ur wings have trouble remembering how 2 fly. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Life's questions can drive a person absolutely mad. I like all the questions you ask and how you experimenting with all the thoughts of what could be. Good poem, i enjoyed it a lot mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
not bad for a Bamie gal....:P Nice post Tifferoke  ~Time you enjoy wasting was not wasted.~ John Lennon |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
wow its lovely to b reading your poems again and i sure hope all works out with whomever this poem was written for and they would b crazy not to want you silly *rolls eyes* as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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