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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I decided that I needed a poem that was a little happier because looking back at my poems they are all a little sapier So I said I should write something thats just a little uplifting But when it comes down to it all I can write about is aching I know I'll make it up, I said but it turns out I suck at using my "imagination" So now I sit here stuck Is there even a teenager out there that is not depressed is there a poem out there thats happily expressed? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL this is too good....I understand just what you mean, all the poems, well most of the poems I wrote when I was a teenager had to do with being in love with someone who had no clue or about heartache, andthen the ones about my parents not having a clue LOL this was so great  |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
LoL yay!! A HAPPY POEM!!! We need a few more of those around here mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo" |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Very good Poem LCBS! I like it alot. I can understand what you're taking about. Although I do know a couple of poems that are hapy and up lifting but your right...there aren't many. Most of them are depressing poems. I love the poem !! Keep up the really good work you are doing! ~Dan |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
LCBS, Hmmm. Is my life that depressing? Is that why I feel such a closeness here in the Teen Poetry forum? Anyway, I liked this upbeat poem. Dawn |
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