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baby0508
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

0 posted 2002-02-08 11:27 AM

I'm sorry that I haven't posted in a while i have been so busy and actually happy. but i am back,not as sad as i once was!!

A Heart Controlled Mind

I must extinguish all these feelings
that I have for you.
I need to put out this burning flame
now that you and I are through.

I seem to tell myself to do
things I can't seem to achieve
and force things into my mind
that I just cannot believe.

I can tell myself I'm happy
that life without you is just fine
but deep inside I'm lost
because you are no longer mine.

I just can't listen to my mind
when it battles with my heart
because I know that my heart is right
and we don't belong apart.

Although my mind is filed with reason
and at times I know its right
In the end it doesn't matter
because my heart always wins the fight.

Demonic Illusion
Member

since 2002-02-07

Posts 50

1 posted 2002-02-08 02:27 PM

hmm honest opinion of this would hafta be....ver nice job

Fear not what you see, fear the Demonic Illusion in which you do not see

TigerZ
Member

since 2002-01-02

Posts 83
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2002-02-08 09:40 PM

excellent is all i can say...excellent =)

A life without love…is no life at all.

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

3 posted 2002-02-08 10:40 PM

They always say its better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all

Well thats bull****! Both cases suck, and I hope you find happiness soon!

~LCBS

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-02-09 12:42 PM

It is true...the heart is what wins in the end because if you dont follow it the stupid thing will piss you off until you fix everything around and you realize you shoulda listened to your heart all along! Never be afraid to follow your heart..

Great piece

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2002-02-09 05:44 AM

Great work girl!!!

I can tell myself I'm happy
that life without you is just fine
but deep inside I'm lost
because you are no longer mine.

I like that part best...Its like you captured my feelings in your poem except I dont want the guy back...

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

Devils Angel 666
Member

since 2001-11-30

Posts 71
CT, USA

6 posted 2002-02-10 03:01 PM

I like this poem very much. I can relate to this in meny differnet ways
Keep up the good work!

~Dan

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

7 posted 2002-02-10 03:37 PM

Baby,

I felt like this a few years ago when a boyfriend and I broke up. I hope things get better for you soon. I really enjoyed your poem.

Dawn

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