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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-02-07 06:58 PM



Your eyes illuminate,
your smile captivates.

Every second that i'm with you,
is a second more,
that my life's complete.

Every second that i'm not with you,
is a second more that I love you.

You mean the world to me,
you're everything,
that I have ever dreamed of,
and I wouldn't traid you,
for the world.

© Copyright 2002 Heather - All Rights Reserved
Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
Posts 71
CT, USA
1 posted 2002-02-07 07:49 PM


I feel the same way about you and you know it.  I Tell you every chance that I get that you make me and my life worth living and soo complete.  You mean everything to me and I will never let you leave me.

Love you more than Anything!

~Dan

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
2 posted 2002-02-12 01:11 PM


this is a really sweet read
hope you show this person this piece
let em know how you truly feel
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


DawnG
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3 posted 2002-02-12 01:28 PM


you two are just so sweet. Another great poem.

           Dawn

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