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Demonic Illusion
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since 2002-02-07
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0 posted 2002-02-07 01:09 PM


Take a little trip,
Down the road they skip.
Strike them down one by one,
Too blind to see the sun.
See my face 100 times,
Listen as your bell chimes.
Sitting with the lonely street light,
Still so far from human sight.
Sacrifice those who haven't seen,
The world beneath the green.
This brings tears to my eyes,
Plucking the souls full of lies.
Feasting on their ignorant demise,
Growing stronger the more I despise.
Above all the others,
Devouring sisters and brothers.
They don't see me in all their confusion,
For I'm nothing more....
Than a Demonic Illusion....

Fear not what you see, fear the Demonic Illusion in which you do not see

© Copyright 2002 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
LCBS
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1 posted 2002-02-07 01:41 PM


Welcome to Passions....
Great first post...
Hope to see more of you

~LCBS

Kosetsu
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2 posted 2002-02-07 05:45 PM


Sounds good...my sort of writing. Welcome to PIP.

-Adam

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3 posted 2002-02-07 05:54 PM


Welcome to Passions!  This was a great first post.  I hope you enjoy it here!
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4 posted 2002-02-07 08:07 PM


Hey!
Welcome,
Awesome poem.
I love it,
morbid as that may seem..
It is great
the flow and
the picture you create
are super!
Can't wait to read more
see ya around,
Jen

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Devils Angel 666
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5 posted 2002-02-07 09:00 PM


Good Poem!  I like reading some of the darker poems like this.  Very cool! Welcome to piptalk! I hope you like it here and I hope to be reading more of these poems soon!
~Dan

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6 posted 2002-02-07 10:26 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!

I enjoyed this a lot and i cant wait to read more from you!!!

P.S.- check ur e-mail for a special greeting!

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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