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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
Sensations scheming in echoed halls Where reflections lay dormant and cold. Icy figures marked in white held down Temptations of inner turmoil’s release Skies red and creeks now a deadly dry Reminiscent of November's drought. Released a dream unto the moon Weaving malicious thoughts in black. Choking amenity shadow on frozen emotions Silent concrete of empty darkness Voices existence leads to self-destruction. Circle stabbed with black and white lines Meaningless worth under the blue sun. To let go is the beauty of optimism A broken glass never again perfect The shadow screams as stagnate withers From a whisper came the finality in black Yet silent arms coated in fluid madness. Locked in clasps of broken flesh eaten images Gloom radiated in shades deathly grey Pages torn and crumpled in masses Under the brash sanctity of purified dreams Harmonious nature lost in battles for wholeness Dancing beneath a curtained demise. Demolished sand castle in fluctuating clouds All is damned with graceless reasons. Blackened voices, manifests order and logic Shadow s depth cast in enigmatic recrudesce Colors that façade. But white smoke dissembles. Memories damped in scarred claret on carcass and how sad, In winters harsh depression? That cherry blossoms; as malignant casket... And in a trembling iron infirmary Imbrued water of senses origin, evince The grime of beauties visual rendering ceases... With dust that collects upon abandoned dreams Feathery candour fastens a seatbelt on bereavement, a Blueprint detained in rough drafts idleness Surrendering the entirety that all the while ...never was meant to be, a completion. "Dont piss me off, Im runing out of places to hide the bodies..." [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (02-07-2002 02:07 AM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow!!! Strong piece albert!! The imagery was great  BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
wow this was very powerful. the imagery was very detailed and deep. great job you two! you should collab more often!  **Kiley **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
I really liked the poem! It's great for the imagination! keep up the great work! |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Very good poem! I liked this one alot. Very strong message |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
ALBY!!!!!!!!!! Where have you been? This was great, it really was fun to read. Both of you did a wonderful job! Albert..seriously...talk to me kiddo...where have you been? |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey look, I found it Whoa. I think I'll be back when I can suck in all of this...sllluuurrp  ~Carly "Hey! The oven's on!" |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wow.... (youve rendered ME speechless....wow....WOW!... ill be back.....WOW!) life's not about who wins or loses, or about whos got the better car,or the most money. it's about living,and trying to make the best of what we have. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Thank you very much guys. We like it, don't we, sunhine? We also appreciate the replies. Elizabeth If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a very strong poem. Great job you two. Dawn |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
*bump*..more people should read this and reply  Zombie |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, omg, i luved this one, i've always liked both of u two's writings, but this wuz just AWESUM!  *bows* ~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
*bummmmmp* The feeling of Sleepiness when you're not in bed, and can't get there, is the meanest feeling in the world.-- Edgar Waston Howe |
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