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Teen Poetry #5

I'm Told

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2002-02-05 08:14 PM

This is another one I wrote today in English... It's not one of my best, and I don't know if you'll even undertand it, but let me know what you think anyway.

IM TOLD

This silence isn’t silent
At all
I’m in a room full of people
Yet alone
And every one of them is clueless
That I’m screaming inside
Every one asks me if I’m all right
I say yes
They won’t understand if I tell them…

My heart is on fire
Yet I’m in the cold
Because I love her…
Or so I’m told

My heart and my mind
Yelling again
Why can’t they just agree?
I’m lost
Yet surrounded by people
From my hometown
Everyone thinks that I am fine
They don’t know…
Life is crashing down on me because…

My heart is on fire
Yet I’m in the cold
Because I love her…
Or so I’m told

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-02-05 08:38 PM

Everyone thinks that I am fine
They don’t know…
Life is crashing down on me because…

Why do we tell them we are fine when we are dying inside...I guess thats what PIP is for....Great read....

~LCBS

I was drowning in my own tears, until you threw me a life preserver

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