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CwboyAtHeart
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0 posted 2002-02-05 06:18 PM


Howdy... I wrote this today when I was in English with some extra time...  Why the heck do I always write my poems in English class?!  lol  Oh well...  It's a song...  So yeah,let me know what ya think.  

SAY THAT I LOVE YOU
Today I'm breaking down the walls
That separate
My heart and yours
Because it's you that I love
And dream of...
Yet these walls, they trap my words

I will say that I love you
And I wish you were mine
Then I'll tell you how much I need you
We will see just how love shines

Tonight I'm breaking the silence
Between you and me
We're so far from eachother
Yet it's you that I hold
All night on...
Yet this silence stabs my heart

I will say that I love you
And I'm glad you're mine
Then I'll tell you how much I missed you
We will see how far our love can shine

You are the one that completes me
You are the one that makes me whole
You are the one that I need...

I will say that I love you
And I'll hold you tight
Then I'll tell you how happy I am
We will show the world our love is right


      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (02-05-2002 08:07 PM).]

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Cody, I love it!!! (check over your spelling though hon.) It would make an awesome song!! good job!
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