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PurplePeopleEater
Junior Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 11

0 posted 2002-01-31 09:27 PM

this is my third poem. i actually like it better than the first but thats just me. here it is...

Your Worst Enemy

I saw your anger; I saw your pain
Hurting people is how you gained
These wounds you’ve caused will never heal
I don’t see how you could ever feel

This torture of all my thoughts
Hell it seems, is all you brought
I tried so hard to get to leave this madness
All it brought was pain and sadness

Screaming and crying is all I see
Take all this pain away from me
Lord I pray, I need you here
I don’t want to live dying in fear

Finding a way through this terrible fate
Hoping to end it before it’s too late
I want to leave; I want to go
You have become my biggest foe

Your mind has put you to the test
You’ve accomplished it second best
There is no sense in being calm
The addiction has you in its palm

Grasping your fear it tears you apart
A new life for you is beginning to start
You no longer have a say
The fire will take you along the way

LCBS
Senior Member

since 2001-11-29

Posts 532
Connecticut

1 posted 2002-01-31 10:44 PM

Dont you hate people who hurt others to make themselves feel better

This is great, and I can relate to it a lot

Good job

I was drowning in my own tears, until you threw me a life preserver

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2002-01-31 11:17 PM

hey danimonkey
this poem was indeed quite good, but i already told ya that. it's pretty cool that you are writing now, i don't feel like such a dumbass anymore lol. once again, pretty poem, and i am glad you r showing it to people on here. see ya.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2002-02-01 07:25 AM

hmmmmmmm....angry thoughts...anger PROVOKING thoughts at that. the guys sounds like an idiot if you dont mind my saying.
....vent more often.

eyes...........feeel...D
rooop
Y
..zzzzz...

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-02-01 02:40 PM

Wow, really good poem hun...this reminds me a lot of myself and how i use to feel almost all the time...nicely written and full of emotion..

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

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