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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2002-06-26 07:45 AM


my heart aches because
it has been broken once again.
you said you oved me,
but yet you left me.

you said you would never hurt me
but you did
why must you do this to me
why must these tears fall

you told me you loved me and i you.
but to you love is just a word
to me it is my soul and my heart

i fear i will never love again
but i must try
for what is life without love?

i am me don't tell me different!!
JEFF IS ONE HOT STUD *RAWR*
i want him *DROOLZ*
dam hes hott!!!

© Copyright 2002 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
songsoftheaftermath
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1 posted 2002-06-26 10:16 PM


well im glad you realised he was an idiot who didnt give you the lovin' you deserved.
it hurts sure...but there's plenty fish in the sea for you to devour!...in the mean time have fun fishin'!

could the darkness be my friend?

CwboyAtHeart
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2 posted 2002-06-30 06:13 PM


I'm sorry it happened to you, but I'm glad you realized and moved on...  There's more guys out there, just hang in and you'll find hte right one.  Nice write.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

Tess7
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3 posted 2002-06-30 06:19 PM


yeah i am sorry to hear that happened to you too, but you gotta know that every time you get hurt like that it's just a lesson for when you meet the right guy, it teaches you how to recognise that he is the right one and articulate your feelings. Then that's just what I think
Tess x

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4 posted 2002-07-01 12:55 PM


Life without love is life to the fullest
Life without love is lonlieness to the max
Life without love is strange and scary
Life without love is for the strong not the weak
Life without love is for the loved not the loveless.

You are definately loved Robin. *hugs*

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5 posted 2002-07-01 06:09 PM


tks all!! yes rhonnie i know i am loved hehe *hugs*

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