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Teen Poetry #5

Unknown love

SlowDrag
Member

since 2002-01-10

Posts 53
Tx...need i say more

0 posted 2002-01-31 04:29 PM

your smile captivates
your eyes illuminate
my heart.
every second that i'm not with you,
i love you just that much more.

you're every thing i dream of.
even if i can't alway see your face.
we have the perfect love,
in some far off place.
in my mind.

"Pardon me while I throw up, I guess some people never grow up..."

Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

1 posted 2002-01-31 05:48 PM

What a beautiful poem!,Tho unknown love is one of the saddest things in the world...perhaps you should make this unknown love...known?.
Great write

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2002-02-01 12:20 PM

The joys of love, huh? (:
I enjoyed this..
Looking forward to more!

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-02-01 02:40 PM

Love is just so amazing...you sound like ur on cloud 9 and i hope it forever stays this way

Cute poem!

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

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