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Teen Poetry #5

Admiring From Afar

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-30 10:32 PM

Howdy. It's been a few days since I've posted, so I decided to post another poem. Another one that is far from my best, but oh well. I guess I kinda wrote it about somebody that I guess I kind of like. I dunno, my 'love life' is so confusing right now. lol Anyway, let me know what you think, and I know you're all going to tell me I should talk to her.

  Oh ya, make sure u check out my new sexy pic over there, too.  lol     -rolls eyes-

Admiring From Afar

I seem to be amiring you from afar
I guess that doesn't do much good
Because I don't get a chance
To know who you really are

I don't know all too much about you
But we have a lot of the same friends
We danced at that one dance
Only talked for that minute or two

Your quiet but you seem so sweet
I've admired you for quite some time
There's something you have
That noone else can compete

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (01-30-2002 11:42 PM).]

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

1 posted 2002-01-31 11:12 AM

Nahh, not your best, Cody, but still well done.
The pic scares me! You look angry... heh, but change is always good, right?

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

gymnast
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

2 posted 2002-01-31 01:42 PM

I really liked the poem even though its kinda short-but its short and sweet so that counts all the more. I totally know what you mean by admiring from afar-something which I'm going through just now. hang in there-if shes not the one then someone else will be!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-01-31 05:33 PM

Well, go talk to her!!!

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