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I look in the mirror
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I look in the mirror |
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Shmurfkins New Member
since 2002-01-29
Posts 5the state of confusion |
I look in the mirror and all I see are useless little reflections of me they don't show the inside only the out though I have much to hide no one knows what I'm about I look in the mirror and try to find what it is I desperatly try to hide I was a jerk I was so afraid no one would ever even be able to look at my name so I decided to start again and hope that the people I knew would still love me and want to be my friends. |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
This was a really good post,but you should never try to hide the real you. The people who matter won't mind and the people who mind don't matter. take care *for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time* |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Great first post, I've been there before... *hugs to you* and keep writing, I want to read more of your work! Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Great post. I enjyoed the write.  I'm just wondering... who are you? Tell us, my friend! Tell!  Don't make me get violent! LMAO...Titus Naustious From The Ups And Downs Of This Earthly Existence. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is a really good first post!! WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! A mirror is useless when you want to see the inner you. All you have to do is to see yourself in your mind's eye, and empathy is the word. Hope you'll find a better you... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Really good post.many times i look in the mirror feeling like there is so much to me and so little to show..nicely done BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Welcome to Passions! This was a great first post. I really liked the 3rd stanza "I look in the mirror and try to find what it is I desperately try to hide" I think this shows that not only are you wanting to let your true self out, but that you aren't even sure what your own true self is. Maybe you should just not worry what anyone else thinks and do what you want. Anyway great first post. ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A great piece of poetry and good luck with the new start Andrew Andrew says: |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! (back?) at any rate, I am happy you are here....and please, check your email for a special greeting |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I agree with Andrew...good luck on the new start. there are no grudges I'm sure. Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Wouldn't it be great if mirrors did show you the inside you....But there will always reasons to judge us, so I guess its not that easy. LCBS I was drowning in my own tears, until you threw me a life preserver |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
If you feel like so, it's never too late to start anew Hope things have worked out for you là où est mon amour? |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
I loved this poem!! It's real brave of you to adnit when your wrong and try to start again! Keep up the good work cause this is brill! |
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