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lauren03
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0 posted 2002-01-29 12:50 PM


I hate the way I loved you
the way I always said forever
I hate the way you made me feel
when you looked into my eyes
I hate the way no matter what
you could do no wrong
I hate the way you made me feel
when you walked out my door
I hate the way it felt when we
said let's just be friends
I hate the way you sounded when
you said I miss you and still love you
I hate the fact that I believed you
even when you said a year or two
I hate the things I hear about you
even though I know they're true
I hate the person you've turned into
even though I know you never changed for me
but what I hate the most
is the fact that I hate you so much when I know that I loved you too much

© Copyright 2002 lauren - All Rights Reserved
Jenabou
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1 posted 2002-01-29 04:38 PM


whoa do I ever know how this is.
Im in the same boat
hang in there babe....great post.

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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2 posted 2002-01-29 05:53 PM


Oh hon! I loved this one... it just brought tears to my eyes... especially the last line. *hugs* Keep writing... it's the best way to get through it. If you ever need a listening ear, my inbox is always open.

Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon

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3 posted 2002-01-30 05:06 PM


This was a cute poem..brought back memories..thanks for sharing and keep em coming!

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

TopGunLauren
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4 posted 2002-01-31 01:04 AM


Yeah this brings back alot of bad memories but it's still a really good poem.Keep up the awsome work.
  Lauren

"I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind

"You've got to get yourself together you got stuck in a moment and y

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5 posted 2002-01-31 09:46 PM


Ahh, yes... love/hate relationships and feelings for someone certainly sucks, huh?  Give it time.. and keep writing about it.  Tis great therapy
Be well.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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6 posted 2002-02-05 10:02 AM


that poem brings back alotofmemoriesandihave tosay that its my favorite. keep it up!!!
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